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This episode discusses how a simple three-word change in fundraising language can significantly increase donations.

📚 Grab your copy of Tom Kelly's book, The Million Dollar Nonprofit: https://ip.charityauctions.com/free-book-podcast  What if the difference between an average fundraising email and a high-performing one came down to just three words? In this episode of The Million Dollar Nonprofit, we explore a powerful lesson in donor psychology: small language changes can create massive shifts in fundraising results. In one case, changing just three words in a donation ask led to a $41,000 increase in giving—without changing the campaign, the audience, or the offer. This episode breaks down why that happened and what it reveals about how donors actually make decisions. At the center of it is a simple truth: fundraising is not just about what you ask—it’s about how the donor emotionally experiences the ask. We introduce a clear framework for writing more effective fundraising language: Agency — Make donors feel personally responsible for creating impact Specificity — Replace vague asks with clear, visual outcomes Emotion — Use language that creates feeling, not just information You’ll learn why donor-focused language consistently outperforms organization-focused messaging, how specificity…

People in this episode

Host: Tom Kelly

Topics covered

• fundraising
• donor psychology
• language changes
• emotional targeting
• effective communication

Keywords

• fundraising email
• donor experience
• language changes
• conversion rates
• donor management systems

Mentioned in this episode

Organizations: Charity Auctions

Books & works: The Million Dollar Nonprofit

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