21.22: The Order of the Telling

21.22: The Order of the Telling

From Writing Excuses by Mary Robinette Kowal, DongWon Song, Erin Roberts, Dan Wells, and Howard Tayler

May 31, 2026 · 27 min · Season 21 · Episode 22

About this episode

The episode discusses the order of information presentation in storytelling, focusing on non-linear timelines and their impact on narrative structure.

*Time-Sensitive* Our final WXR cruise is almost sold out, grab your spot before June 4th, 2026 here! This week, we are talking about the order in which we present information to the reader as contrasted with the order, in which events chronologically actually progressed in the universe of this story and why those things might be completely different. We are joined by Margaret Dunlap as we explore non-linear timelines through examples from novels, television, film, anime, and interactive fiction. We discuss how nonlinear storytelling can build tension, reveal character, and control the flow of information. The conversation highlights how writers can use flashbacks, parallel timelines, and carefully placed revelations to reshape a reader’s understanding of events. Our hosts also talk about the emotional power of structure, noting that nonlinear storytelling can shift a story from “what happens next?” to “how did we get here?” or “what does this mean now?” Margaret and our hosts share practical strategies for keeping timelines organized, including notes, spreadsheets, and tracking information arcs. Homework: Find a story—a TV episode, movie, or book—that experiments with nonlinear…

People in this episode

Hosts: Mary Robinette Kowal, Howard Tayler, Erin Roberts, DongWon Song

Guest: Margaret Dunlap

Topics covered

  • non-linear storytelling
  • information presentation
  • character development
  • tension building
  • story structure
  • flashbacks
  • parallel timelines

Keywords

  • non-linear timelines
  • storytelling techniques
  • information flow
  • reader engagement
  • narrative structure
  • flashbacks
  • character arcs

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