#249. 5 POV Mistakes That Pull Readers Out of Your Story

About this episode

This episode discusses five common point of view mistakes that can disrupt a reader's experience in fiction writing.

Most fiction writers are making at least one of these point of view mistakes. Find out which one could be hiding in your draft. You know that feeling when a scene isn't quite working, but you can't put your finger on why? Your pacing, dialogue, and structure all seem fine. And yet something is still off. Nine times out of ten, the culprit is POV. In this episode, I'm walking you through the five most common point of view mistakes, what each one looks like on the page, why it pulls readers out...

People in this episode

Host: Savannah Gilbo

Topics covered

• point of view mistakes
• fiction writing
• reader engagement
• writing tips
• storytelling techniques

Keywords

• POV mistakes
• fiction writing tips
• reader engagement
• storytelling
• writing advice

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